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Play Pretend
Lets play pretend,
pretend you love me
pretend you care
say you'll never leave and will always be there
Let's pretend, just for awhile
wear your beautiful liars smile
just for awhile
Lets play pretend
what a beautiful game
but soon it's over
and my delusions I blame
Lets play pretend,
pretend you love me
pretend you care
say you'll never leave and will always be there
Let's pretend, just for awhile
wear your beautiful liars smile
just for awhile
Lets play pretend
what a beautiful game
but soon it's over
and my delusions I blame
Ok so i wrote this a little while ago, its not very good but still tel me what you think
© 2010 - 2024 Draco-Loves-Harry
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i think lots of people can relate to this i love the phrase "beautiful liar's smile" it is so powerful and true to most chronic liars. All the lines are relative short and flow apart from the last line on the first stanza, but thats my honest opinion don't take it to heart. Overall though it is a lovely piece and i personally enjoyed reading it ^^